Talk:Chocolate

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Former good articleChocolate was one of the Agriculture, food and drink good articles, but it has been removed from the list. There are suggestions below for improving the article to meet the good article criteria. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake.
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December 16, 2005Good article nomineeListed
June 9, 2007Peer reviewReviewed
August 30, 2007Featured article candidateNot promoted
September 28, 2007Good article reassessmentDelisted
May 20, 2008Featured article candidateNot promoted
May 26, 2008Good article nomineeListed
June 3, 2008Peer reviewReviewed
June 10, 2008Good article reassessmentDelisted
Current status: Delisted good article

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Caption from image in Manufacturers section needs correcting[edit]

I seem to have noticed that the image in the "Manufacturers" section is depicting a box of Chocolate Hazelnuts from Sprüngli (not Lindt as incorrectly mentioned). If this could be corrected from:

Lindt chocolates in presentation box for the Switzerland Wiki Loves Monuments Awards Ceremony (2013)

to

Sprüngli chocolates in presentation box for the Switzerland Wiki Loves Monuments Awards Ceremony (2013)

Cheers.

Incorrect grammar on page[edit]

Hello, "Chocolate is a usually sweet, brown food preparation of roasted and ground cacao seeds" is grammatically incorrect. Chocolate can also be white, and other colours.

Suggest edit "Chocolate is a sweet confectionery prepared from roasted and ground cacao seeds."

Semi-protected edit request on 20 May 2020[edit]

Change the last graph of the intro from: With some two million children involved in the farming of cocoa in West Africa, child slavery and trafficking were major concerns in 2018.[5][6] However, international attempts to improve conditions for children were failing because of persistent poverty, absence of schools, increasing world cocoa demand, more intensive farming of cocoa, and continued exploitation of child labor.

To: With some two million children involved in the farming of cocoa in West Africa, child slavery and trafficking were major concerns in 2018.[5][6] International attempts to improve conditions for children were failing because of persistent poverty, absence of schools, increasing world cocoa demand, more intensive farming of cocoa, and continued exploitation of child labor.

Removing the word "However," which does not make sense in context. Danny Kaplowitz (talk) 20:19, 20 May 2020 (UTC)

Done, thank you – Thjarkur (talk) 20:39, 20 May 2020 (UTC)

"Introduction to United States" subsection is underdeveloped and poorly sourced[edit]

This section is editorialized ("an empire still going strong today"), only mentions the formation of the first chocolate manufacturer, and cites a trivia website. Recommend revising sources/language.

Succynic (talk) 17:06, 4 June 2020 (UTC)

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